Banner attempt for DivideMS
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Banner attempt for DivideMS
Looking out for critiques, comments and constructive feedbacks.
Edit : Mmm due to the size of the webpage i can't see a part of it lol. If anyone else can't see, you can go here
https://2img.net/r/ihimizer/img28/9011/dividem.png
Just made this new one, maybe this blends better, i don't really know xD
Edit : Mmm due to the size of the webpage i can't see a part of it lol. If anyone else can't see, you can go here
https://2img.net/r/ihimizer/img28/9011/dividem.png
Just made this new one, maybe this blends better, i don't really know xD
Last edited by noviceboy55 on Tue Mar 22, 2011 12:55 pm; edited 1 time in total
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Re: Banner attempt for DivideMS
noviceboy55 wrote:Looking out for critiques, comments and constructive feedbacks.
Edit : Mmm due to the size of the webpage i can't see a part of it lol. If anyone else can't see, you can go here
https://2img.net/r/ihimizer/img28/9011/dividem.png
Looks good, except the text. The text just ruined it. D: < Btw I was wondering did you use blurs on the background?
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Re: Banner attempt for DivideMS
There are two things that I don't like about this banner:
Other than that, it's pretty decent. There seems to be something 'missing' in the background, though.
- Position of the character. It throws me 'off', if you get what I mean. And on top of that;
- The text makes it really, really awkward. It doesn't seem to match anything at all. Not to be rude or anything, but the color itself doesn't make a good appeal to me.
Other than that, it's pretty decent. There seems to be something 'missing' in the background, though.
Re: Banner attempt for DivideMS
Thanks for the feedbacks. As for text, personally I feel that it doesn't blend in as well. However I don't think I have any text that is suitable unless you can tell me the name of one.
Secondly, I did not use blurs on background, only on the render.
Lastly, do you mind pointing out what's wrong with placing the render in the middle? This is so I can take note of what's wrong and make improvements to future banners / sigs i make.
Secondly, I did not use blurs on background, only on the render.
Lastly, do you mind pointing out what's wrong with placing the render in the middle? This is so I can take note of what's wrong and make improvements to future banners / sigs i make.
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Re: Banner attempt for DivideMS
I see you fixed the text, but it looks a bit plain, and I agree that the background is missing something. And I don't think she viewed the external link to imageshack. Btw how'd you blur the render as in which blur is it? Motion Blur?
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Re: Banner attempt for DivideMS
yes motion blur.
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Brian, yes I did. I'm not that dumb to not read the whole entire post unlike most.
And as for noviceboy (sorry, I don't know your name to address you by it), it just bothers me. It's only how I view it. It's hard to explain, sorry.
And as for noviceboy (sorry, I don't know your name to address you by it), it just bothers me. It's only how I view it. It's hard to explain, sorry.
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